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trigger warning suicide
I am drowning—
water in my lungs,
a scream on my lips,
and death looming
in the blue-green depths.
it's easy to forget why
this is the solution,
when my feet keep kicking.
I tell them to stop,
but they don't want to die.
it seems pathetic,
that I want to be saved,
rescued from suicide.
I am drowning,
and it is taking too long.
I've thought about this,
for months in fact,
and it took all of three minutes
for my mind to flip-flop
back to a future.
death is smirking, unkind,
not the friend I pictured.
I should have gone with the pills,
or perhaps the gun. but, instead—
blue-green-grey-black.
I am drowning—
water in my lungs,
a scream on my lips,
and death looming
in the blue-green depths.
it's easy to forget why
this is the solution,
when my feet keep kicking.
I tell them to stop,
but they don't want to die.
it seems pathetic,
that I want to be saved,
rescued from suicide.
I am drowning,
and it is taking too long.
I've thought about this,
for months in fact,
and it took all of three minutes
for my mind to flip-flop
back to a future.
death is smirking, unkind,
not the friend I pictured.
I should have gone with the pills,
or perhaps the gun. but, instead—
blue-green-grey-black.
update
so i'm here. kind of. off and on. i don't really write anymore, but i'll probably check up a couple times a month.
thank you to everyone who validated my 14 year old self, i needed it.
Devious Journal Entry
1. For each of the 10 first people commenting this journal, I will put their avatar and the 3 deviations I like most from their gallery on the list!
2. If you comment, you have to do the same in your journal, putting the tagger on the first place. The idea of this is not to get a free feature, it is to spread art around for everyone!
I) !KMforward (https://www.deviantart.com/kmforward) (couldn't pick three)
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II) :icona-would-be-king:
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anxiety [warm-up 1]
usually do little poems with little attention to rhythm or continuity to warm up, thought I'd post since I haven't been able to get beyond them lately
why, out of all the places to choose from,
does fear settle in the chest? it has
the free reign of my body, as much as
I'd like to feign control of it. it could
wander wherever it pleased, but it makes
a snug little nest right where my
heart beats, thump thump thump, choices
choices choices, thump thump thump.
it clots my blood and one of these
days it will swell too big with
anxiety and doubt and terror and
dreams, and I'll collapse to the floor
dead of a heart attack,
an attack
A Favour
Hey folks--
So, I'm considering entering a writing contest, which involves three poems. Now, I'm hoping to write at least one new thing for it, but one or two will be old stuff. However, I can't for the life of me decide what. So! A question: what's your favourite of my poems? Or just one that you really like, or think is well-written? If you could tell me I would be obliged. Thank you!
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I'm a little uncertain about the statement of "I am drowning". I think there are other ways this can be implied. However, the imagery is very effective (my feet keep kicking. I tell them to stop, but they don't want to die.), and the last line is very cool, giving it a nice sense of what could almost be perceived as closure.